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A Poem by raindroplove

my ducktape can fix your heart
my ducktape can fix your broken dreams

my ducktape can keep your mouthshut
my ducktape can came make you stay still

my ducktape is sliver
mine is pink

© 2011 raindroplove

Author's Note

yea i know its short

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At first I thought it was going to be a cheesy love poem, but then You went and switched it. I liked it. Short and simple. Gets the point across. Thumbs up

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very short and interesting...Love short interesting things!!! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago

I've had to read this a couple of times to get my head around it (in a good way!) The first stanza made me think that maybe the poem wouldn't be nasty, then the second stanza changes the perception. I'm thinking maybe it's about the two sides of a relationship? Either way, love the structure, how the colours show the different people.

Posted 8 Years Ago

no i wasnt

Posted 8 Years Ago

were you high

Posted 8 Years Ago

Short sweet to the point


Posted 8 Years Ago

This is really cute! I like the different colors and how short it is. Short and sweet :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

lol i like it

Posted 8 Years Ago

my ducktape can keep your mouthshut

Oh How I loved this line, I wish I could do this to someone too. LOL
I really enjoyed this write and the colors used. Nicely written.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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9 Reviews
Added on May 9, 2011
Last Updated on May 9, 2011
Tags: ducktape



in your pocket, AL

im me if you dont like that then get over urself XD more..


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