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ducktape

ducktape

A Poem by raindroplove

my ducktape can fix your heart
my ducktape can fix your broken dreams

my ducktape can keep your mouthshut
my ducktape can came make you stay still

my ducktape is sliver
mine is pink

© 2011 raindroplove


Author's Note

raindroplove
yea i know its short

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At first I thought it was going to be a cheesy love poem, but then You went and switched it. I liked it. Short and simple. Gets the point across. Thumbs up

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very short and interesting...Love short interesting things!!! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


I've had to read this a couple of times to get my head around it (in a good way!) The first stanza made me think that maybe the poem wouldn't be nasty, then the second stanza changes the perception. I'm thinking maybe it's about the two sides of a relationship? Either way, love the structure, how the colours show the different people.

Posted 8 Years Ago


no i wasnt

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow
were you high

Posted 8 Years Ago


Short sweet to the point

Matthew

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is really cute! I like the different colors and how short it is. Short and sweet :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


lol i like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


my ducktape can keep your mouthshut

Oh How I loved this line, I wish I could do this to someone too. LOL
I really enjoyed this write and the colors used. Nicely written.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on May 9, 2011
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raindroplove
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in your pocket, AL



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