Salvation

Salvation

A promise of salvation

as she wades into the tide.

Mouth moist with salted sea,

and tears she has cried.

A promise of redemption,

as she slips beneath the waves.

Here beneath the water,

can souls like hers be saved?

Rainee

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Yes, they can, Lady Rainee ⁓*

A soul like hers is precious to behold … you stir the senses and the deepest emotions ever-so beautifully, M'Dear, a poet's poetess you truly are!

Hugs `n brightest blessings of warmest thanks! ⁓ Richard

[Quasi-Motorolla]

Short and beautiful. I love it!

[Nwang]

wish it was a little bit longer, but great writing.Loved it.

[Paul Bell]

Would love to see three more verses of this, great last line.