A Poem by daydreamer

world of love and romance is similar to the real world, we have to take each step with caution and passion


Love is a whirlpool

Of  feelings and desires

 passion and fashion

syncytium and syncopation.


Love is a whirlpool

Of lust and revelations

Trust and deception

Reverberating reverence.


Descend into it!

Listen to the reveille

Of forthcoming turbulence

A rendezvous of illusory renegade.


Swordfish waiting

To bite down, to ambush

To feast on heart and  minds

Of novice joyful youth.

Love is a whirlpool!

My friend,

Test your testosterone

Before you educe and gyrate

Into the tentacles of progesterone.






© 2011 daydreamer

Author's Note

happy to write something after a long time

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Wonderful write.like this : )

Posted 12 Years Ago

thanks everybody for your sweet comments:)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Oh this is good. A brilliantly bright poem. Love as a whirlwind, carrying you to goodness knows where. Sometimes though you just have to sit back and enjoy the ride. Great job

Posted 12 Years Ago

Very nice. Bold message. Love must be a whirlwind, it makes the ride worthwhile.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Love can be a turbulent ride for sure!.. but, you haven't lived, if you haven't loved! I would rather have loved ...what is life without passion? Nice write!

Posted 12 Years Ago

Wow, you best not go into the water .. all that scary progesterone lying in wait ..
Don't quite know what to make of your words .. But this is an interesting endeavor !......... J. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on December 3, 2011
Last Updated on December 3, 2011



Mangalore, karnataka, India

Hi i am Rajesh . I am an Indian Male citizen, residing in small town called Mangalore in Karnataka state. Writing has been my dream i have been nurturing since my childhood. I have a long long way .. more..

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