Convict Mankind

This poem is based on the polluted deeds of mankind and it's consequences.

Mankind has adopted the ideas harmful, 

That pollutes the Earth's oceans roomful. 

Never ever the oceans complained 

Then also, the man has not maintained, 

His pollution becomes dreadful. 

Is this the purpose of rivers to flow? 

To contaminate their water that glow.  

Never ever the rivers asked, 

But the man has frequently harassed, 

The kind rivers and become their foe. 

But there's a limit of tolerance, 

The man has to face the consequence. 

The result are flood and inundation, 

Sometimes vanished the entire civilization 

And it is just to the man's belligerence. 

O Man! Where is your wisdom? 

Will you make the entire Earth a sodom? 

There's a lot of time still, 

The man, you can change your will 

Otherwise, your shoulders will be burdensome.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems

Reviews

[Breadwinner]

“Is this the purpose of rivers to flow?
To contaminate their water that glow.
Never ever the rivers asked,
But the man has frequently harassed,
The kind rivers and become their foe."

Another nice tribute to nature...really we need to save nature...here and there I see only the pollution and rush..I wish that may everybody read your work..

[Raj Sahu]

I too wished the same. Thank you.

[Namyh]

Raj - After 7 million years of evolution, we have only recently graduated from being 'dumb' into becoming halfway 'smart'. That took the last 2 million years. It's gonna be a long time before we graduate again and become wise, hopefully before we annihilate ourselves and the planet we live on. Good work indeed Raj. Namyh

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much. 😊😊😊

[Ed]

interesting.

I liked the second verse particularly

with the way things are going the rivers might glow literally. lol

I posted a poem using the term sodom on the same day

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you for your appreciation. 😊😊

[Farhan Shaikh]

It creates few images in my mind i am sure it did same to others..very well written

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much. 😊😊

[wordman]

man has managed to ruin the world,and all that`s in it.now he is killing him self

[Raj Sahu]

Yes, it's a very sad thing that man is killing himself. 😣😣

[LAROB]

Honestly poetry isn''t really my thing but I liked it. I like the images your writing creates.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you for your appreciation. 😊😊