Merry-Go-Round

This is a poem based on old childish memories with carousel.

I recalled today the days that passed,

Hid in the dark works of today.

The hard toils of the busy life always

take my childhood far away.

Altogether, the coarse works made;

my entire schedule a rough essay.

The days I spent in my favourite past,

the rides of my lovely Merry-Go-Round;

reminds me of all that childish memories

and clatters and clap and sound.

But today in midst of busy life,

Never ever; my lovely childhood I found.

My lovely carousel, made my childhood lovely,

The sweet fragrant memories smear everywhere.

The friends of mine on that Merry-Go-Round

were unique and hard to find anywhere.

I still miss my amiable childhood,

I think it is lost somewhere. 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems

Reviews

[PoeticBlindness]

“The days I spent in my favourite past,
the rides of my lovely Merry-Go-Round;
reminds me of all that childish memories
and clatters and clap and sound.
But today in midst of busy life,
Never ever; my lovely childhood I found."

Childhood is the best part of anyone's life. One is just lackadaisical for an adult's work and just endorsed in his playful activities. Merry-Go-Round was my favourite ride in childhood and still my heart wants to take its ride. Thank you for sharing.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Karen John]

You haven't lost your childhood, its buried deep within you.

[Raj Sahu]

Yes, it is. Thank you for your review.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I think I’ve read this before still love it 😊 thanks for entering another competition

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Jack O]

I like being older. Childhood is a nightmare of others telling you what you must and must not. Happy?
Meh.
I like your poem. I understand most of it. But you use the word lovely too much.
take care.

[Raj Sahu]

Perspection differs from person to person. Thank you.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thanks for entry into another of my competitions, still love it,, very good, well done, thanks so much

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you again.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thanks for entering into the dear me contest great piece

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This is beautiful thanks for entering into the contest

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Donna]

Childhood memories are very precious. I'm thankful that at least I do have the great memories! Nice writing!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.

[Pooja]

Still some of my nephews and nieces have their rides! I quite enjoyed it.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Kleptomaniac]

On reading this I too weep for my lost childhood. Thank you to help me recall it.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Crazy Robot]

Childhood..carousel...er...I can't bear the pain..

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.