Merry-Go-Round

Merry-Go-Round

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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This is a poem based on old childish memories with carousel.

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I recalled today the days that passed,
Hid in the dark works of today.
The hard toils of the busy life always
take my childhood far away.
Altogether, the coarse works made;
my entire schedule a rough essay.

The days I spent in my favourite past,
the rides of my lovely Merry-Go-Round;
reminds me of all that childish memories
and clatters and clap and sound.
But today in midst of busy life,
Never ever; my lovely childhood I found.

My lovely carousel, made my childhood lovely,
The sweet fragrant memories smear everywhere.
The friends of mine on that Merry-Go-Round
were unique and hard to find anywhere.
I still miss my amiable childhood,
I think it is lost somewhere. 

© 2017 Raj Sahu


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“The days I spent in my favourite past,
the rides of my lovely Merry-Go-Round;
reminds me of all that childish memories
and clatters and clap and sound.
But today in midst of busy life,
Never ever; my lovely childhood I found."

Childhood is the best part of anyone's life. One is just lackadaisical for an adult's work and just endorsed in his playful activities. Merry-Go-Round was my favourite ride in childhood and still my heart wants to take its ride. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!



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You haven't lost your childhood, its buried deep within you.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Years Ago

Yes, it is. Thank you for your review.
I think I’ve read this before still love it 😊 thanks for entering another competition

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Years Ago

Thank you.
I like being older. Childhood is a nightmare of others telling you what you must and must not. Happy?
Meh.
I like your poem. I understand most of it. But you use the word lovely too much.
take care.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Years Ago

Perspection differs from person to person. Thank you.
thanks for entry into another of my competitions, still love it,, very good, well done, thanks so much

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Years Ago

Thank you again.
thanks for entering into the dear me contest great piece

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Years Ago

Thank you.
This is beautiful thanks for entering into the contest

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Years Ago

Thank you.
Childhood memories are very precious. I'm thankful that at least I do have the great memories! Nice writing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Still some of my nephews and nieces have their rides! I quite enjoyed it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Years Ago

Thank you!
On reading this I too weep for my lost childhood. Thank you to help me recall it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Years Ago

Thank you.
Childhood..carousel...er...I can't bear the pain..

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

3 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Added on May 4, 2017
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Tags: carousel, childhood, memories, life, past, merry go round, friends, missing

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Myself Raj Sahu from the historic town of Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India. I had completed my high schooling with flying colours from Choithram School, Indore in Humanities stream and was first in or.. more..

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