Mine of Noble Acts

Mine of Noble Acts

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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For a person who is always ready to serve others.

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Bring your love and care
To those, whole-heartedly, searching for them.
It would be a boon, 
to receive your love so soon,
as they were despondent in their despair,
seeking a lovely, lovely heart,
which is your splendid part.

They seek the scent of the flowers,
Poor, poor they! unaware of the greatest mine,
of endless affection and fragrance
that would never run out
but would eternally brightly shine,
leaving a lasting strong remembrance
to everyone- a gentleman or lout.

To live for others is an elegant thought,
To lend your noble hand to the impoverished,
To share your meal with a destitute boy,
To give your love to a crooked lady.
All these rich beauties gathered by whom?
Whose name would witness the day of doom?
Such noble natures can behold a few,
But I find one in you.

© 2019 Raj Sahu


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Your poem addresses a topic that is not very common here in the USA. I have been a person who loves to volunteer all my life & I think others should do it if they are able. It is a way to GET as much as you GIVE. The best part of your poem are lines 2,3,4 of the last verse . . . becuz here you are getting more into the specifics. Your writing is grand, but it can tend to be general. Messages always come alive when you get down to the detailed level as you start to do in the lines I mentioned. All in all, good work to be honoring those who give of themselves (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!



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A very gentle invitation to help those who need us. Great job!


Posted 4 Days Ago


A wonderful poem. I think it hurt the rythm a little to have varying numbers of syllables in your couplets but the overall effect is still very charming.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Thank you for sending me a read request to such a wonderful piece of writing. It reminded me of a person I knew who had a mine of noble acts but now when I look back, I doubt whether all of those were even genuine or just for show off (I saw a drastic change in that person)!

Posted 8 Months Ago


Well done. I hope yiu like my work too - cheyenne

Posted 9 Months Ago


This is a wonderful poem about kindness

Posted 11 Months Ago


I do believe in karma Raj.
"To live for others is an elegant thought,
To lend your noble hand to the impoverished,
To share your meal with a destitute boy,
To give your love to a crooked lady.
All these rich beauties gathered by whom?
Whose name would witness the day of doom?
Such noble natures can behold a few,
But I find one in you."
I love the above lines. A great lady told me often, "What you give without the need of reward will open heaven gates for you once day." Powerful and needed words shared.
Coyote


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot!
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
A wonderful poem of caring and love...excellently written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
The poet seems to be describing a saint in this one. There are many indeed who could benefit from the attention of such a person.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
Quite refreshing, steady flow and lovely words my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
it reminds me of a caregiver looking for someone to care for or an animal looking for someone to love. A great way to show range and emotion.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Year Ago

Thank you!

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Myself Raj Sahu from the historic town of Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India. I had completed my high schooling with flying colours from Choithram School, Indore in Humanities stream and was first in or.. more..

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