Silent killer

he know the word ''' love'' ,

but he doesn't know how to love ?

- Ashi

Reviews

[Writergurl]

so true about some people, nicely said

[Ashi written tale & poetry]

Thank you so much for kind words.

[Soren]

An all too true statement about most people. What we think is the way to love is not what the other person wants or expects. Well stated

[Ashi written tale & poetry]

Thank you so much happy to read ur comment :)

[HumanHotTopic]

wow... There is true talent in portraying as much emotion as you just did in such a short poem. The only advice I have for you is to check your grammar.

[Ashi written tale & poetry]

Thank you Glitch for your kind comment , do let me know where you found the incorrect grammar I used ? it might helpful for me.

[HumanHotTopic]

T have no idea if it's supposed to go with the syllable count, but in the first line the word "know" would really be "knows".

[HumanHotTopic]

**I (I'm sorry, typing in the dark is hard)

[Ashi written tale & poetry]

its ok you can guide me.