Day out

Day out

A Poem by Ashi written tale & poetry

Walking on the path 🚶
Music in my mind 🎶
Am Dancing in my heart ♥
Smile on my lips �'�
Heart singing the song
Music is full on 🎶 🎶
Feeling is the best
Flowers on the path
like am walking on
the heaven,
Flowers showering the love
Like my taking the bath....
Ohh Ohhh am feeling energized
world around me the best😀
- Ashi (09.04.2022)

© 2022 Ashi written tale & poetry


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This is just so positive, and something we all should read with the sadness and cruelty going on in our world today. It sounds like this person is in their own little world dancing and walking to their own beat and i love that. Sometimes we just need some positivity in our lives. I love the emojis as well!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ashi written tale & poetry

1 Year Ago

thank you so much
Inventive, I liked the emojis the added a flair. every line a positive thought. It was energizing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashi written tale & poetry

1 Year Ago

thank you for your kinds words
Remember this feeling for the times you aren't feeling so good.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashi written tale & poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you for ur comment ,feeling is good when walking alone on the path and feel all element (of na.. read more

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Added on April 9, 2022
Last Updated on April 11, 2022

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Ashi written tale & poetry
Ashi written tale & poetry

IN, India



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