Be My Tourniquet

Be My Tourniquet

A Poem by Ramya
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I burst out with this poem when I felt unbearably miserable in the absence of love

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When my heart bleeds
Be my tourniquet...

Wrap your love around me
And numb the pain away

Coz theses needles of pain
Are pouring down on me like rain

Prick me with your kisses
And lull the pain away.

© 2012 Ramya


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There is a stunning honesty here... the emotional anguish that can be so overwhelming, and yet that one person can wash over the heart and mind with a healing like no other... a salve to stop the soul's bleeding out. Powerful image so hard to shake.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I had the vision of two lovers laying in bed, kissing, holding, and loving....


Nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, sweet, to the point :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great job - I really like this poem XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this one! Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's one bandage that doesn't ever hurt.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this piece.....Whisk

Posted 12 Years Ago


A beautifully crafted poem.
Short but overflowing with emotions.
Great work there!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 7, 2012
Last Updated on May 16, 2012
Tags: love, pain, missing you, love poem, love and pain, absence of love

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Ramya
Ramya

India



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