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Boredom Blues

Boredom Blues

A Poem by Ramya
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There was this day at work when I did not have anything to work on and I felt totally, utterly sleepy.....this poem is an extension of that boredom, an expression of what I went through.

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When nothing works in my mind,
And all thoughts come to a screeching halt,
I sit totally blank; a clean chalkboard.
Restless, impatient,
Disconnected from the mundane,
It is hard to fathom this gap, unseen.
My mind ain’t a devil’s workshop, no!
It is but a thoughtless existence,
When absolute boredom seeps through.
I slide down my never-ending chair,
Eyes half-droopy and ridiculously insane,
I crawl helplessly on the floor,
Akin a sloth that has gone askew!
Pillows, I hit them;
Fluffy and white,
Clouds of soft sensations,
Dreamy delights!

Just being there,
In that cottony comfort
Is what I love the most.
I do not care, I do not need
Bliss anymore.

© 2012 Ramya


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I wish we can fill chalkboards with love,
but it is filled in the hearts.
Good write

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love the simple humbleness of the work, the words and the points of pause and effect.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Impressive, I'm like TheReal, cannot make boredom sounds colorful, so nice job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


My mind ain’t a devil’s workshop, no!It is but a thoughtless existence,When absolute boredom seeps through. I slide down my never-ending chair.

........................Great write. I like your poem. Very nice. With regards.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could never make boredom sound so colorful! Lol I like this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is nice.il urge my friends to do this when nothing works out in there mind to avoid trouble.

Posted 8 Years Ago


There have been those days for me as well, where I had to get up, go outside, and take a walk to get my juices flowing again. The worst thing in the world is for your boss to walk up on you when you are passed out snoring. lol.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Awesome poem! I love the description! Keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great job with this piece. Great imagery.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh I can so relate! I like it!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Ramya

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