Worthless Lovers

Worthless Lovers

A Poem by Ramya
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May be I was furious with how "some men" treat their women. The words just ran all over the paper.

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To all the worthless lovers,
Who treat women like s**t,
Just know this bit brethren
That you are in a deep dark pit.

Cowards and spineless maggots,
How can you ever act like so?
When you
Spoil,stamp your girl’s heart
Like there is nothing more.

Do you know what love is?
Do you care what it’s all about?
Never a worry to you is that,
For all you care about is
Flesh, flesh, flesh!

So there I call you “filthy pigs”,
Your days are not going to last.
Every moment will be filled with regret,
Coz of ill-treating your worthy lass.

© 2012 Ramya


Author's Note

Ramya
No hard feelings men, if you are not one of them types!! This is just some intense writing....please feel free to share your thoughts.

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nic writing...ya we men treat girls as a flesh at some moments but its natural, we always respect girls but at some moments we wondered from our thoughts, its not tolerable or be pardoned but we tried our best to treat u girls like princess. At some moment of a relationship its good to be parted away for the sake of both, at that moment we behave heart less and hide our feelings...
thought provoking write...keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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wwwooooowwwww amazingly written keep it up !!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Such intense emotion. If the computer could write it as you felt, it might not be readable through angry scribbles.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with you completely. Powerful and intense emotions flow out skillfully here. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very intense. I felt my anger,frustration and pain as if I was writing. On top of all the emotions, It spoke the truth! Good writing! Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

true, i loved it, powerful and strong...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love when you toss the curve ball that breaks the mirror behind the bar. This could be something Margret Cho would do in her act.



Nicely, nice..



and the note took the cake.

Posted 8 Years Ago


women do the same thing
men and women, both in their natural state, seek spirit and flesh
the balance depends on incarnations, conscience and experience
I would say re-incarnations, but it seems redundant to me
when you can just pluralize the word

Posted 8 Years Ago


I agree with you; I am often disappointed by how others of my gender treat women in relationships and social situations in general. It is one of those cases that we all need to work together to achieve honesty and love with one another.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know there are a lot of guys like that but girls do the same to the nice guys. I have had my heart broken and I know plenty of others who have. I am sorry about all of the bad guys but bad people exist in both genders. Good work though keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nic writing...ya we men treat girls as a flesh at some moments but its natural, we always respect girls but at some moments we wondered from our thoughts, its not tolerable or be pardoned but we tried our best to treat u girls like princess. At some moment of a relationship its good to be parted away for the sake of both, at that moment we behave heart less and hide our feelings...
thought provoking write...keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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