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Echo

Echo

A Poem by Suavis_Umbra
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Amaterasu-- goddess of light;hoping that my heart can escape the night.

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I wait by the foamy golden shore,
shadowed by a  glowing honey sun.
I seek above clouds--ill of frore.

I consult with spirits of dead,
lurking-howling,creeping in my head.
I dig and search graves of memory lane,
I dig and search and soon lay in a dark chain.

I seek ,she, who hides in cave.
I seek-- hoping that she can save.
Amaterasu-- goddess of light;
hoping that my heart can escape the night.

I seek myself into a mirror;
I look-I gaze , I see a figure.
Soon it entangles into dark vines.
Soon it becomes part of a dark spring.
I seek myself into a mirror-
I seek to set the darkness echoing.

© 2012 Suavis_Umbra


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A very atmospheric effort here. Confinement, hope for rescue, then confinement again is what I take from this piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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8 Years Ago

thanks a lot , XD XD , and yes you are right , i think we all want to be rescued by something , anyt.. read more

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Tags: spirits, dead, cave, mirror, vines, honey, shore, sun, head, dark, chain, memory, lane

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Suavis_Umbra
Suavis_Umbra

Terra, Dark Corner of the Earth, United Kingdom



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