Your Voice

Your Voice

A Poem by Rashi Jain
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Whenever I listen to his voice, I feel the Autumn Breeze taking away all ruined things of me.

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That bold voice, oh,
a lion’s fearless roar,
invincible,
gentle as a peacock's feather,
the voice of my love,
and,
the peace that rests in your voice,
I told The oceans,
is greater than his charm,
greater than his deepness.
and,
the infinity of your voice,
I told the sky,
is prettier than his birds,
prettier than his stars, his sun, his moon.
and,
your voice’s power, oh,
I told forests,
is mightier than his guardians,
his wild angels,
and,
the smell of your voice,
I told the earth,
smells pleasing than his wet soil.
Sorry, for rain is jealous.
Oh.
Your voice’s magic,
I told the heaven,
is my favourite melody,
harmony.
Your voice is the music, sound, of my love,
will you play it again?
-Rashi Jain❤

© 2017 Rashi Jain


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Rashi Jain
This Seventeen Year Old poet awaits your feedback ❤☯

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mou
it's so sweet Rashi..I don't know whether you write it on your life or not....but if it is then that person is very lucky to have someone in this world..one is loved because another has given them that very special place..you have described your thoughts or subject by comparing it to the most beautiful gifts of nature and all the time it got down by your that special voice..I really love your write

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Thank-you 💕 The most beautiful comment I received today ♥
mou

2 Years Ago

you're most welcome



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I love it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I loved the way you compared that person's voice with so many things..That person is indeed lucky to have someone like you..You know love is the most beautiful thing that can ever happen to someone and you are lucky that it happened to you...The way you described your thoughts I felt that one day you will write the lyrics of most romantic song ever..I loved each and every line of this beautiful poem...You are indeed a great poet..
Keep on writing dear..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you so much ❤
I enjoyed this poem. Thank you Rashi for sharing your amzing poetry and your thoughts.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thankyou ❤
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Rashi.
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mou
it's so sweet Rashi..I don't know whether you write it on your life or not....but if it is then that person is very lucky to have someone in this world..one is loved because another has given them that very special place..you have described your thoughts or subject by comparing it to the most beautiful gifts of nature and all the time it got down by your that special voice..I really love your write

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Thank-you 💕 The most beautiful comment I received today ♥
mou

2 Years Ago

you're most welcome
The voice of love, is the most beautiful than anything ever.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Indeed. Thank-you ♥☯
Priyanshi

2 Years Ago

My pleasure.
Love is not just in the air - it's everywhere it seems from your marvelous poetry. It has also taken a place in soul itself. What a wonderful feeling it is - love. Good one. thanks for sharing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Thankyou ♥☯
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SKY
Love changes the world around you. Welcome into the lovers club lol...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Haha. Love is the strongest force, it's bound to make things Beautiful. ❤☯
SKY

2 Years Ago

Yes it really does.
Everyone like romance and this

Your word's romance,
i told Juliet & World
is romantic than Romeo
romantic than ShahJahan

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

♥♥ Hey. Thank-you so much Friend. You've got such a great piece ☯❤
Abraham George

2 Years Ago

its my pleasure.
"the infinity of your voice,
I told the sky,
is prettier than his birds",

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

♥♥ I'm glad you quoted my lines ♥♥
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Voice of romance is heard loud and clear. The tone and meaning can be critical, too. Excellent.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Thank-you ☯♥
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Rashi Jain
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New Delhi, India



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