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 I want you!
 not this , I want you to take this
 its yours I'm giving it to you
Why wont you take it!

Why wont any one take it
 it free and out !
 Most people would have killed for it
I know people who still get into fights over it.

But yet no one will take it from me . And not just any one
YOU ! YOu wont take  it from me . WHy ?

We talk about almost everything
but when it comes to this. . . well the  subject
gets changed.

why wont you please take this.
I think i'm the only one my age who still
has this . I asking  you to

I'm giving it to you ! its yours, you can have it .
forever yours  cause i don't want this

Reviews

[Carrie Manor]

Allo! I like this write, the feeling you gave it makes it bursting with emotion, keep up your good work Ravena! :)

[deadlysilence]

interesting write