my light

A sappy yet bittersweet love poem.

your azure eyes

torn from the sky

smile over me happiness

no one else ever

could; there was a joy i could

remember once before you

lost to some ocean

in a moon of a world i can no

longer recall, and i wouldn't want to

because you're the cause 

of my brightest spark 

shining within in me the brighest light �"

the one that convinces me to

lock all the titans within me confessing

all the evils i could pursue to be

quiet for the rest of eternity;

you silence in me all the darkness

itching to steal away my fire

making me to strive to be a better person

someone you can be proud of,

to suffer you not the sorrows of the

arrogant or the proud,

but the purity of stars shimmering their

quiet eloquence into the sky.

- linda m. crate 

Reviews

[Nkosana B Masuku]

" but the purity of stars shimmering
their
quiet eloquence into the sky." Totally beautiful poem,nice ryhthm of words and heartfelt.great work

[linda m. crate]

Thank you! I think that's probably my favorite line, as well. Thanks for the feedback, Nkosana.

[Nkosana B Masuku]

A pleasure :)

[krish]

Nicely penned, great write. you dig it. 100/100.

[linda m. crate]

Thank you! I'm really glad you could enjoy it. :)