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my light

my light

A Poem by linda m. crate
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A sappy yet bittersweet love poem.

"
your azure eyes
torn from the sky
smile over me happiness
no one else ever
could; there was a joy i could
remember once before you
lost to some ocean
in a moon of a world i can no
longer recall, and i wouldn't want to
because you're the cause 
of my brightest spark 
shining within in me the brighest light �"
the one that convinces me to
lock all the titans within me confessing
all the evils i could pursue to be
quiet for the rest of eternity;
you silence in me all the darkness
itching to steal away my fire
making me to strive to be a better person
someone you can be proud of,
to suffer you not the sorrows of the
arrogant or the proud,
but the purity of stars shimmering their
quiet eloquence into the sky.
- linda m. crate 

© 2013 linda m. crate


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" but the purity of stars shimmering
their
quiet eloquence into the sky." Totally beautiful poem,nice ryhthm of words and heartfelt.great work

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

linda m. crate

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I think that's probably my favorite line, as well. Thanks for the feedback, Nkosana.
Nkosana B Masuku

6 Years Ago

A pleasure :)
Nicely penned, great write. you dig it. 100/100.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

linda m. crate

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm really glad you could enjoy it. :)

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Added on July 22, 2013
Last Updated on July 22, 2013
Tags: lovesick, romance gone awry, romance, love, loving, relationships, relationship

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linda m. crate
linda m. crate

Conneautville, PA



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I am a two time push cart nominee with a passion for writing. My poetry, short stories, articles, and reviews have been published in a myriad of magazines including those in print and online. more..

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