Eternal Song

Eternal Song

I don’t want this song to ever end

I want you close to me forever

I'm starting to descend

We’re falling in love together

You lips press against mine

And I swear it stops all time

We dance

Spin slightly

To this song endlessly

This song that will last for an eternity

 

I don’t believe in true love

But, baby, this is close enough

All I know is that this feels right

Me

You

Here

Now

Dancing

To this song endlessly tonight

Reviews

[Bridget Murphy]

It's one of the most perfect poems I have ever read! It's so beautiful and so romantic!!!:)

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Very pretty. (:

[bobby]

Didn't really like the concrete structure of the poem until the end when you went to one word lines that somehow effected me more. Nice discription of a romantic interlude.

[Hoskinsish]

Very nice, very nice indeed. I loved where it got down to one word per line. It was a sense of falling fast, which for some is exactly how love happens. This was a lovely feel good poem. Nice Job.

[paparapapa]

Beautiful! It has a brilliant flow. I loved how simple it is yet it can tug your heartstrings. Great write. :)

[Thea]

Brilliantly penned...Your style is so unique...
Well done!
:)))

[Arielle Ann]

lovely....nice flow of emotions in a single gush!

[TreeSpirit]

Beautiful doesnt even begin to describe this poem. the flow was easy and the rythem was great wonderful all around.

[VelvetKissesXo]

very beautiful poem & not to unrealistic. I love it, you wrote this piece beautifully. with LOVE ~ S.

[emma]

wow, amazing. lovely, it was brilliant.