Life

Life

A Poem by Rosalyn Marie
"

this popped into my head last night...

"

Life

 

It starts with a breath.

And you start out small.

But soon you begin to grow.

Taller,

And taller,

And taller.

And once you reach your tallest,

You slowly begin to shrink.

Shorter,

And shorter,

And shorter.

And then it ends with a breath.

© 2010 Rosalyn Marie


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Rosalyn Marie
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I like this. It seems almost....folksy. Like..maybe an old, wise storyteller that everybody in the town knows is saying it. I don't really know why I thought of that. Maybe the 'It starts/ ends with a breath.' parts. Nice job. I like the visual effect.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like this. It seems almost....folksy. Like..maybe an old, wise storyteller that everybody in the town knows is saying it. I don't really know why I thought of that. Maybe the 'It starts/ ends with a breath.' parts. Nice job. I like the visual effect.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like ittt :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice. Almost diamente. I like the text. It really conveys your message. Starting and ending the same. It's like a cycle. I have no criticism.

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet truth. We all get born, and then we all die! The end.

I like it. Enough said.

100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


aawww... thts a rly nice poem. it belongs on a sympathy card cuz thts rly cute. i mean this in a good way btw. i LOVE it

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like this. It's really cool how you change the size from little to big to small, again. IT'S THE CIRCLE OF LIFE!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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