Life

this popped into my head last night...

Life

 

It starts with a breath.

And you start out small.

But soon you begin to grow.

Taller,

And taller,

And taller.

And once you reach your tallest,

You slowly begin to shrink.

Shorter,

And shorter,

And shorter.

And then it ends with a breath.

Author's Note

hmmmm....

Reviews

[Kasey Jones]

I like this. It seems almost....folksy. Like..maybe an old, wise storyteller that everybody in the town knows is saying it. I don't really know why I thought of that. Maybe the 'It starts/ ends with a breath.' parts. Nice job. I like the visual effect.

[SenoritaAriii<3]

Like ittt :)

[Alex Thomas]

Nice. Almost diamente. I like the text. It really conveys your message. Starting and ending the same. It's like a cycle. I have no criticism.

[Jong Schrijver]

I like

[Gianna Perry]

Sweet truth. We all get born, and then we all die! The end.

I like it. Enough said.

100/100

[Arien Bleuefire]

aawww... thts a rly nice poem. it belongs on a sympathy card cuz thts rly cute. i mean this in a good way btw. i LOVE it

[Kirbetsy]

I like this. It's really cool how you change the size from little to big to small, again. IT'S THE CIRCLE OF LIFE!!