Hymn

Hymn

A Poem by Jeremy (J.C.K)
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Deep-rooted religious trauma and healing from it inspire a lot of stuff, huh?

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Let's meet at Heaven's gate

Don't be alarmed once you meet your fate

There's a book with a list of names

Surprise! You're going to burn in the flames

Don't pass go or collect $200

Going to hell I can hear the scholars

Oh, you think I am talking about me?

This is about you

 Just wait and see

© 2021 Jeremy (J.C.K)


Author's Note

Jeremy (J.C.K)
I just wanted to post something and test the waters. I have many more and it isn't all religious. Thank you for reading

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Hi, JCK! You seem to have an unusually good control over rhymes. I mean, many of us try.. and do it to some extent, but you seem to be a natural. I like your poetry, please post more. And, no problem if they were all religious, :) what we need is nice poems. chau!

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on October 21, 2021
Last Updated on October 21, 2021
Tags: religion, dark, sinner, death, life, church, hell, heaven, poetry, amateur

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Jeremy (J.C.K)
Jeremy (J.C.K)

Gallatin, TN



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Come as you are or don't come at all. Thank you for reading. I post all my stuff on my new poetry FB page @jckpoetry more..

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