A Poem by Punk rocker

this peom is about falling under per preessure and losing your true self


The rainbow flashes before your eyes.

Showing all it's colors bright.

Red, yellow, violet, blue.

They all call out beckoning for you.


Lost in confusion you loose control.

Of one of the dearest things you hold.

Your own color, the color of you.

Is slowly striped away from you,

by the colors tht are jealous of you.


This happens to colors most,but colors few,

fight back for what truly belongs too you.


You struggle and sweat as you fight against you.

For it has also taken the color away for you.

In this fight you might lose a battle or two.

But you will win the war and get back what belongs to you.


Always keep your color true.

Never let it be taken away from you.

© 2010 Punk rocker

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I liked you used the word "you" too much but other than that, this was another great poem! Wonderful job!

Posted 9 Years Ago

great poem, i like it

Posted 9 Years Ago

yea!!! *slides down rainbow**
*eats skittles**
keep rockin (:

Posted 9 Years Ago

i like it, but i think u say "you" to much. anyways good write

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on May 4, 2010
Last Updated on May 11, 2010


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