Lilly Bright

Lilly Bright

Lilly Bright does things right

She plays softball tight

She will put up a fight

Lilly Bright

Lilly Bright will give a a fright

She has a small height

Reviews

[Mr.Writer]

So simple, yet so creative! Wow, it has a bit of everything in it! You know, I like this Lilly Bright! You've created her really well! It could be longer to be honest, and every line doesn't exactly have to rhyme :) I liked it overall very much! :)
Keep it up! :)

[Aubrey Harrell]

Thank you. I wrote this with her and actually it was just for fun. Thank you though and I might continue it since it isn't finished.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem! :) I actually didn't know that she was a real person, sorry :D

[Tony Jordan]

Your rhyming capabilities are exemplary but you need to work on the structure and content.
But still...I got a good sense of Lilly Bright this cold Friday night...
Keep taking Lilly Bright on an occaisional wee write.
:)

[Aubrey Harrell]

I actually just didn't finished the poem, but thank you so much. That is my best friend actually and I wrote it just for to make fun with her.