Mornië Utúlië (The Coming, And The Fall Of Darkness, Part I)

Mornië Utúlië (The Coming, And The Fall Of Darkness, Part I)

A Poem by Mirko Galušić
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It's a piece inspired by the Elven words from J. R. R. Tolkien's universe: "Mornië Utúlië"("Darkness has come"), and "Mornië Alantië" ("Darkness has fallen"). If you can, please do read the Part II...

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When darkness comes,
I'll be all alone,
With you in my mind,
In the soft, forest's embrace...

There, I'll be lying under an old oak tree,
On the forest floor of sleeping grass,
In the silence of night,
Broken only by the song of the faeries...
With my sleepy eyes fixed up,
On an evening star,
Which reminds me of you...

Shining bright in the night,
Filling my eyes with its cold, flashing light,
She stands so beautiful,
Bathed in the rosy light of a nebula
Covering the dark sky with it's subtle,
Gloomy clouds of stardust...

Not even the moon, the sun of night,
Can compete with it's stellar beauty,
Or should i say,
Your's...

There, I will dream,
Put to sleep by the faerie's song,
Bathed in the light of an evening star,
Longing for the dawn...

 

© 2013 Mirko Galušić


Author's Note

Mirko Galušić
If you can, please do read the Part II , "Mornië Alantië". Thank you :)

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Wow. Just incredible. You have a great style, amazing flow, and a very good grasp of the English language. This is, by far, one of the best poems I have read on this site to date. It's on my top twenty list of the best poems I ever read. Please don't stop writing, you truly have a gift.

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It is interesting how the forest is magical in your poems. You bring it alive. Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow. Just incredible. You have a great style, amazing flow, and a very good grasp of the English language. This is, by far, one of the best poems I have read on this site to date. It's on my top twenty list of the best poems I ever read. Please don't stop writing, you truly have a gift.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mirko Galušić
Mirko Galušić

Bar, Montenegro



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I'm a young artist... Singing in a metal band, playing 6 instruments, and writing poetry... My poetry consists of some pieces being only for reading, some can be put in a music song, and some of them .. more..

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