Birth of The Doors Haiku

Birth of The Doors Haiku

A Poem by Rebecca Buller
"

I like people who shake other people up and make them feel uncomfortable. - Jim Morrison

"

It’s hot-his name’s Jim

Venice Beach, he reads some poems

Let’s swim to the moon.

© 2013 Rebecca Buller


Author's Note

Rebecca Buller
The final line belongs to James Douglas Morrison, Poet/Rock Star. Enjoy your 'Moonlight Drive,' Jim.

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I'm not too familiar with the Doors, Rebecca, but I loved your poetry - the line "Let's swim to the moon." is especially appealing. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rebecca Buller

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Joyce! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And sit back some time and let The Doors open your mind t.. read more
I loved this Becca - you've written an excellent Haiku

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rebecca Buller

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Ms. Noodles! I'm glad you enjoyed it:-)
i like this...i like your lead-in to his line...

we can swim to the moon in words, in poetry, in song.


jacob

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rebecca Buller

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it:-)
Picture perfect in my mind, and ears...

I enjoyed this one immensely!!! :)
Great little Senryu dear Rebecca :)

- Elisa



Posted 6 Years Ago


Rebecca Buller

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Elisa! I'm glad you enjoyed it:-)

6 Years Ago

You're welcome always! x
The title caught my eye, Rebecca. I am a huge doors fan. You are so right when you said, 'It's hot.' Angi~

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rebecca Buller

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it, Angi:-) :-)
Wonderful write.
Happy to learn and enjoy the song.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rebecca Buller

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Peace:-)
zainul

6 Years Ago

This is my pleasure,great poet.
A lovely tribute to an amazing poet and musician! Let's swim to the moon...(sigh) beautiful!

:) Julie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rebecca Buller

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind review, Julie! Break on through to the other side:-) (Another good song, btw.. read more
Jim...*sigh*...I've always loved his talent in terms of being a lyricist. He truly was a poet... Nicely done, my friend!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Rebecca Buller

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it! He truly was a poet first:-)
"c'mon baby, light my fire, try to set the world on fire"

then we'll swim.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rebecca Buller

6 Years Ago

Ha-ha! Sounds like the perfect plan:-)
I like those kind of people too, and I LOVE this one Rebecca.....!! Excellent Senryu...and the Doors, sigh....swim to the moon sounds like a plan!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rebecca Buller

6 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it:-) Peace:-)

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Rebecca Buller
Rebecca Buller

Goltry, OK



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My name is Rebecca Buller and I work for an insurance company in northwest Oklahoma. For me, writing is more than a simple hobby or an escape from the chaos of life. It allows me to dwell within a wor.. more..

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