a prromis to friendship.

To all those amazing friends out there, a promise.

I will protect you.

I will pick you up when you fall.

I will put up with your crap.

I will be your rock.

I will keep yoour secrets.

I will ppull you upp when you need it.

I will neever let you down.

Let me in and I will be theree.

I will be your friend now and forever more.

You wwill never get rid of me!

I will fight for his friendship.

I will win for our friendship.

I will never give up.

Together we will win.

Reviews

[Serend1p1ty]

Great write.
I wrote a similar poem about friendship. It's important to me so to see it expressed in poetry really touches me.
Great write, but just maybe, put more powerful words or imagery, to really express the strong feelings you have for friendship? Just a suggestion.
Otherwise, such a great piece of work.

Yours truly,
cloud6

[Suicidal Teddybear]

Unlimited,

Together we're unlimited,

we'll be the greatest team theres ever been,

heheh you'll never get rid of me either :P,

xxxxxx

[Jim Clarke]

What I like here is that you have captured the meaning of true freindship. It is one thing to have casual friends with good intetions. It is quite another to have a real friend.

I wrote a fairy tale about friendship. You should read it.

[Schnookums]

a few spelling errors but i love this so i'm prepared to look over them lol xx