Rebel Angel

Rebel angel

Walking and waiting

Rebel angel hides in the dark

Floating though life

Waiting for him

Rebel angel watches

Pretends to smile

And laughs when it is needed

Rebel angel.

Not a beauty but unique.

Rebel angel, Waits silently,

She is not good, nor bad,

She is not loud, nor quite,

But she listens and waits.

Rebel angel watches the stars

And knows she will never be one of them.

Rebel angel is no normal angel.

Reviews

[Twilight]

This provides some degree of insight, into the unique personality of the writer. Whilst it may not rhyme or flow, good poetry does not necessarily have to demonstrate such attributes. Furthermore, this piece is not sentimental or pretentious. Nor, does it appear to exaggerate the writer's thoughts, in any way. Indeed, whilst reading, I felt that I wanted to know a little more, about this friend!

Thankyou, and keep writing!

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real nice piece of writing... well writen...

[Marlena]

Very pretty, probably my favorite from you ^^