Lunar Eclipse

Lunar Eclipse

A Poem by redflutterby
"

senryu for the recent lunar eclipse...from Red's perspective

"


~Crimson hunter's moon~

~Rises in her dark brown eyes~

~Like lust's bright fever~

© 2014 redflutterby


Author's Note

redflutterby
Inspiration from nature...

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i like how you turned this event of nature into that subtle quest of the woman hunting for her man...

love senryu...to say it in so few words and allow the reader to find his or her own moon.

j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

╰☆╮I really, really like this.╰☆╮

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nature is amazing. Love these few short lines.

Posted 6 Years Ago


and this is an exquisitely penned perspective.

Posted 6 Years Ago


captured beautifully..................... it is enchanting, the crimson moon, and lustful.............. v nice

Posted 6 Years Ago


Of course you would be inspired by the blood moon! A hot little senryu here, Red!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow~ amazing how jsut afew simple words can have such impact just as any lunar eclips wold. Bravo.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much...I appreciate you reading my work!
WOW, this is fantastic senryu…. Ilove the moon and night and your description of the eclipse is delightfully chilling.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

6 Years Ago

I try to keep the faith that I can but hope is on life support.
redflutterby

6 Years Ago

Sigh....stay positive Dale!! Hugs.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, I will try… maybe I am better off alone.
Wow … the words and the picture are jaw-dropping in their expression and effect on the reader. I would like to have seen the man who inspired this piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

6 Years Ago

Lmao.....he is quite impressive himself! Thanks Pryde...
Pryde Foltz

6 Years Ago

Hahahaha … I thought so.
redflutterby

6 Years Ago

.......;-D

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