Lunar Eclipse

Lunar Eclipse

A Poem by redflutterby
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senryu for the recent lunar eclipse...from Red's perspective

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~Crimson hunter's moon~

~Rises in her dark brown eyes~

~Like lust's bright fever~

© 2014 redflutterby


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redflutterby
Inspiration from nature...

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now THIS is what I am talking about.. it is spicy, enchanting, and skillfully seductive.. the imagery in my head right now, oh yes!! well done girl.. I absolutely LOVE this.. favs!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

6 Years Ago

oh yes ma'am, you SURE did that.. it is tucked away in my library.. that says something:)
smil.. read more
redflutterby

6 Years Ago

Wooweee.....happy dance!!!
AprilRN1210

6 Years Ago

*giggling* @ you girl..
A lusty mood imbued in this gorgeous senryu. A full blood moon connotes all sorts of carnal whispers.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

6 Years Ago

Yes...carnal is the perfect word. Thanks so much Anne!
it is a fever ;) what a spectacle ... so cool to watch and read your senryu ..
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

6 Years Ago

Definitely have a fever here...whew! Lol. Thanks for sharing in my spectacle!
good poem, but I think it's suppose to be a haiku , cuz haiku are maint for nature but senryu are more about humour or human nature

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

6 Years Ago

It could be taken as both...since the emphasis is more on the females response, metaphorically speak.. read more
Latifa

6 Years Ago

thank you for the info
Yep, from nature, but haiku nature or senryu nature, does nature "lust "?? just saying .. lol Andrea me thinks there's a "hunter's moom in your blood ...danger danger beware senryu in area ... lol. Can you tell i love your poem!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

6 Years Ago

Hahaha...i would say this was is senryu nature!! And yes lust is a part of nature...at least Reds. L.. read more
redzone

6 Years Ago

Has to be that "red moon " spell you are now under. Perhaps you should sign this one Lustfully yo.. read more
redzone

6 Years Ago

Nice to know you are under the influence again ..;0)
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ron
WOW I love this one RED.
Although I didnt see it last night I did feel a lot of energy running through me.
Very well penned as always.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

6 Years Ago

Well. hey there stranger!! Glad you enjoyed my foray into the seductive hunters moon. ;-)
Than.. read more
ron

6 Years Ago

Hello stranger ;)
You are most welcome.
Wow, this is sexy, sensual, and decidedly RED.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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redflutterby

6 Years Ago

OH YES....it is!!! Lol....I was decidedly inspired by the lunar eclipse among other things. ;-)

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