Hell-bent

Devil on my shoulder

And no Angel in sight

But since it's up to me

I'll take the Devil for tonight

Reviews

[emipoemi]

.....If it were "up to you", might not you go seek out the angel? A thought.

This is splendid in its brevity and I like the message that it implies. Nicely done. You don't have to fully accept this (as it's def "up to you"), but for additional power and more fluid musicality, you could put the "angel" at the beginning of the line and say something along these lines: "the Angel out of sight". Another thought.

But overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. Well done!

[Stephanie]

Thank you!

And it was quite intentional to take the devil out than to seek an angel ;)

[emipoemi]

como quieras

[light and ashes]

Short but not exactly sweet.
;)
Nice, I like it.

[john l smith]

Just for the hell of it?..........

[Relic]

.................................I'll go with that. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

......and they say the devil was once an angel too....!
I like the brevity of this. And it did make me think too, it is after all, up to us on what we seek.
Interesting write.

[Stephanie]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed

[Rye]

OH WOW This is so very good, I love this write.

[Gee]

Sometimes nice to throw caution to the wind, the Angel can get a wee bit boring if her advice forever followed.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Nice short antidotal write - shows a fun-loving nature and a good sense of humour - well done my friend ... :-)

[Stephanie]

Oh why thank you :)

[Jade]

THIS IS AWESOME!!!
I enjoyed this piece a lot.

[Stephanie]

w o w thanks so much, means a lot