I am..

I am..

A Poem by redthai

I am me, woman, mother, friend, and lover

Shadow, with remnants of a past self

I wonder, If God can see me

I hear whispers of angels, mothers, and long gone teachers

I see glimpses of love, light, darkness alongside shadows of my past selves.

I want love, light, and laughter.

I am me, woman, mother, friend, lover and shadow with remnants of past selves

I pretend, that I feel no pain, that I am strong that I know love

I feel pain from remnants of past selves

I worry that someone will see my pain

I cry in the privacy of my darkness

I am me woman, mother, friend, lover, shadow with remnants of past selves.

 

© 2012 redthai


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thanks .

Posted 11 Years Ago


I did this poem from a promt that went like this, feel free to try it ..I am, I wonder, I hear, I see, I want, I am ( the first line repeated) I pretend, I feel, I worry, I cry, I am ( the first line repeated)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is beautiful. :) You did such a nice job on this. I can relate to some of this poem. I think allot of people can :)
It's very unique and very creative. I love it ^-^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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redthai
redthai

georgetown, demerara, Guyana



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