LONESOME

I walk through the night,
I walk through emotions inside,
I walk through without someone behind,
I walk through alone longing for someone at my back.

What hurts is that,
Through the pain and circumstances I am facing:
Someone would say it's a kind'a joke,
Someone would say it's a kind'a pretend,
Someone would say it's a kind'a mess around,
Without even knowing how it feel to be inflicted by such condition.

I walk across for the second time,
Being deserted,
Being isolated,
Being forlorn,
and being abandoned.

Thinking:
"NO ONE WILL SURELY BE AROUND! :( "

Author's Note

I prefer to use simple words because I believe, being simple means not make use to impress the readers.

Reviews

[LL]

Excellent expressions of the heart:)

[Levi Levin]

One day, you will not be alone :)

[Jess]

awesome!!!!

[mhaie]

no, it doesn't. hehe

[Jess]

ang ganda kaya!!super touch aq;'(

[mhaie]

hehe. thyanks anak. where ka?

[Levi Levin]

I came back and read again. If we hold on and continue on in the fight for the right, we shall surely prevail:)

[mhaie]

yes. true

[chuna]

lonesome...

[mhaie]

yes. hehe

[Levi Levin]

They will appear when you may not expect it. Great poem :)

[mhaie]

Maybe soon.