WORDUP

WORDUP

So I say, word.

Wordup, it’s my turn to converse,

to turn you from my heart.

Baby, can you dig?

I need your words,

your smile,

your visions of what art is.

Word. 

 What else can I say?

Words lay at your feet,

they rise and fall

to your orgasmic beat.

Your words:

they smell of night when the moon is full

and taste like 

skin bathed in the skies

where condors once soared

and whose wings made the valley winds

alive with rainforest hues

as seen thru your morning eyes.

Wordup interplay

crashes thru my mind.

So I say, word

its my turn to converse,

to turn you from my heart.

Baby can you dig?

The words I need

will never come,

have dried up

from my mind, 

even the ones found once in

Nerudian images like:

“and I, tiny being,

drunk with the great starry 

void,

likeness, image of

mystery,

felt myself a pure part

of the abyss.

I wheeled with the stars.

My heart broke loose with the wind.”

Wordup,

the mystery is you.

And you my mystere, 

are the wind I dance to. 

Wordup baby.

Can you dig?

(Note: the quoted lines are from a Pablo Neruda poem called “Poetry”.

~~redzone~~

Author's Note

thanks for reading... no psycho romance but romance as we dance... oh baby word up...

Reviews

[Ren Grace]

very interesting poem! Love the mysterious hint

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the way you mixed your words with Pablo's...nicely done...a poet finds that sooner or later it is his or her challenge.."wordup!"

to need someone else's words...for sustenance...a poet's dream.

[redzone]

And Jacob, there is none better than Neruda.. thanks Jacob for stopping by and for your words.. indeed, wordup...

[Sami Khalil]

"I wheeled with the stars.

My heart broke loose with the wind.”




Wordup,

the mystery is you.

And you my mystere,

are the wind I dance to.




Wordup baby."

I love how you wheeled and dealed the stars along with your beloved. Nerudian images within the redzone...Bravo

[redzone]

Neruda, one of my favorite poets.. thanks Sami, I always appreciate your reviews...

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)................

[s y e]

I'm liking this one, dude, this was fandabbydoo. I loved this one, you're on a roll with these poems.

Amazeballzzz!

[redzone]

WHOA!!! I got a "fundabbydoo" review from noodlebumble!! plus a "amazeballzz" .... ninjawarriornoodle all I can say is WORD!!! ;0)

[s y e]

Ha, you did indeed, those words are the two best words you could ever get. ;-P Kidding. Pleasure.

[redzone]

well they are special words to me Sye... so :-p lol

[s y e]

Good. I like you then. We can be friends!!

[redzone]

too late noodlebumble, we are friends whether you like me or not... oh well... sorry to be the one to tell you.. HA! :-p

[s y e]

Oh very funny, I don't mind being your friend, you appreciate my WORDS. ;-) LOL!

[Frieda P]

A bit o'sass with mystery in the air....I'm definitely dancing to the beat...wordup, you're too school for cool hon. Raise your glass with me, lovin' the heat. ;)

[redzone]

the music definitely wrote this poem... not to mention the sass... ;0) aaah Frieda, I wouldn't wear those stilettos for this dance, though admit they would add to the sass... lol raising my glass and diggin' the sway.

[Frieda P]

I never take them off luv haha...still dancing, listening to the single life now. ;) If I had my way baby...oops forget that line. ;)

[redzone]

Frieda, do you really want or expect me to forget that line??? that would be like trying to forget .... er nevermind.. ;0)

[Frieda P]

Ha you know the song I take it? ;)

[redzone]

yeah.. just having fun... Cameo... nothing to hide, just living the single life.. having fun.. eyes right!!! ;0)

[redzone]

must be why you wear the stilettos everywhere and all the time... HA1

[Frieda P]

Really only for very special occasions, do you know the pain we gals have to go through to impress you guys?!

[redzone]

I can only imagine, but my question is WHY??? Can't we have a different and less painful way of expressing who we are??? I will dance with you no matter what you have on, or shoes.. think actually the best dance might be after you have stepped out of a wind tunnel and were all confuggaled.. HA!

[Frieda P]

I haven't a clue, but I'm pretty sure it was man who invented them!!

[redzone]

as am I Frieda... seems like men like to torture woman and then call it love or beauty...
read moreas am I Frieda... seems like men like to torture woman and then call it love or beauty...

[Frieda P]

You know what they say luv...Behind every cranky b***h, is the dumb b*****d who made her that way. ;-) Lol

[redzone]

you forgot to add, and deserving of every "b-word" thing done to him.. women can be cranky, even mean spirited, but no woman is a "b" even if spelled differently or a y is added... ;0)