Angelic Burning, Sinful Yearning

Angelic Burning, Sinful Yearning

A Poem by redzone
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Angelic Burning, Sinful Yearning

Time stood still once.
The earth spun off its axis,
the moon dropped from the sky
as leaves turned bright lemony
and violety blue.
You wrote me a poem
covered in gypsy dust,
laced with sexy,
lust filled sin,
and I devilishly took you in
as you whispered seductively,
“Do you get it now!?”
~~~
Oh yes, my love,
I get it.
But I must ask,
“Do you get
I hold you like fire
inside my heart?”
~~~
And then time started again.
An Autumn moon
got caught in my dream catcher’s web
as stars ran in circles
dripping cosmic radiation
on wildflower ecstasies
of insanity’s desires
and you vanish into the
dark vistas of night,
leaving me only this
angelic burning
and sinful yearning

Are you still out there?

~~redzone 12.22.15

© 2015 redzone


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redzone
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'Oh yes, my love,
I get it.
But I must ask,
“Do you get
I hold you like fire
inside my heart?”'

Whew! Damn! This is a beautiful poem filled with so much emotion! I absolutely love the way you describe everything! It's almost teasing! Beautifully penned!! You've got amazing talent!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Whew. This one I really like. steamy and sexy, full of exactly what it says -- yearning.

Posted 3 Years Ago


redzone

3 Years Ago

thanks KL, I was reading through some old poems and comment with Frieda about "sin", and this poem j.. read more
Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

yeah I miss her too. it's hard though, when life is chaotic and your safe place becomes a battle gro.. read more
redzone

3 Years Ago

yes it is..
I am glad that you are able to find your way back KL... and I still have a few of.. read more
I enjoyed the poem my friend.
"leaving me only this
angelic burning
and sinful yearning"
Some people do burn the heart and soul forever. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


redzone

3 Years Ago

You are more than welcome.. im happy that you read and left some words, and that you enjoyed ...
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I did and have a safe and fun New Year my friend.
Like a shooting star, she was there, all of her beauty glowing, shimmering before your eyes, sprinkling stardust on your heart, then was gone as quickly as she appeared. Kind of sad but nice to have had the experience. Great writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


redzone

3 Years Ago

Thanks... she was special and I loved her banter and the poetry she wrote...
And then time started again.
An Autumn moon
got caught in my dream catcher’s web
as stars ran in circles
dripping cosmic radiation
on wildflower ecstasies
of insanity’s desires
and you vanish into the
dark vistas of night,
leaving me only this
angelic burning
and sinful yearning

Wow … that was amazing, Curt:) Truly:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


redzone

3 Years Ago

Thank you Pryde... it's nice of you to say so.. the poem kinda just came to me as I was reading thro.. read more
Deliciously wicked thoughts with the perfect song to accompany them. Everything was perfect once...wasn't it? Everything was just as you wanted it to be. Perhaps you have to hold onto those thoughts and cherish them. The romantic longing and the seductive yearning in every line of this drew me in. If she is still out there, surely the magic of this write will lure her back into your dream catcher's web. Very "nice" words here, Curt.....one of your better writes. Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


redzone

3 Years Ago

aahhh Lydi, my dream catcher isn't strong enough.. lol... besides, you always told me that Joisey gi.. read more
Lydia

3 Years Ago

Yes, it is shame. I still miss her, her sense of humor, and her poetry.
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How magical it is when someone sparks that edge of creativity inside you. It's kind of like a new discovery or rediscovery of yourself. How it works is really cool and addicting. This is an awesome portrait of your creative, poetic heart, dear poet :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


The first poem I have read from this poet. What I like a lot here is the first line of the second verse, the
direct address, that has for the direct address of Donne, a nice contrast to the richer language of the first and second verse. A good poem, well written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


redzone

3 Years Ago

thanks you Leslie, nice of you to read and comment.. appreciate this and glad you enjoyed..
Ah... Why we do what we do. Why we say whatever it is we say. Why we feel the desire to strip naked our needs and wants with fellow writers; asking for their opinions and validdtion?
Do not judge harshly one who gives so much.
Even when you are left holding your own "sin" in the lonely shadows.
Another may have a creative process fueled by unattached passions. They may be washing their pain, loss, joy, enlightenment etc, in baths of self discovery. It has to do with you what you choose and they should be welcomed to give the discourse any meaning they choose... IMO. 😀
Yes, we miss those who inspire us. We burn in the embers of their once vibrant proximity.
Now, use this burning to find your voice of passion! Like you have done here, lament and explore your own needs and longing. You will be the voice another finds their muse.
Sorry to go on and on... I enjoyed the poetry. Not sure about the word use of "sin" here, but other than that I found your write a catalyst of creative thought.


Posted 3 Years Ago


redzone

3 Years Ago

I know. that was the running teasing I would have with Frieda Pickle about her poems not being about.. read more
 David Scott

3 Years Ago

Ha... Thank you for the tolerance. I love Frieda as well... and others who are no longer here. I.. read more
oh those teasing words, the sensual weave in a poem to excite...and then the quick good night, goodbye, account closed, on account of....it was just for attention...

Posted 3 Years Ago


 David Scott

3 Years Ago

We will not. We are all good friends here. I get emotional over this topic... Thank you again for.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

i will not delete mine either...thanks much to both of you gentlemen....you two are reasons why i fe.. read more
redzone

3 Years Ago

here here indeed!!! and THANKS!!!

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