"Sea Of Love"

"Sea Of Love"

A Poem by redzone
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....any day of the week poem, for a freind..

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Sea of Love

Way over on the West coast
there is a smooth rolling sea,
you can float on it
and never get wet.
Other times, it crashes froth fully 
on the sand and rocky shore
drenching you with wetness and intent.
It is here you can see them
hand in hand
on the beach,
strolling along playing tag with the sea.
~~~
“Come with me, my love
to the sea, the sea of love...”
Maybe it’s just fancy,
a fantasy of sand castles made
while shifting with each tidal wave.
Still, tides and time
never really go away,
they beat, beat, beat
in an endless sway
to the sounds of surf
and two hearts at play.
~~~
So, my new found friend;
“come with me, my love
to the sea, the sea of love.” 

Aztec Warrior / redzone 6.10.16

© 2016 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
...thanks for reading... hope it's not too over the top... my excuse??? er.. do I have to have one??? lol okay, I just love this song... how's that???




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I love it, and I was thinking about the song as I read it, even before I saw the link. Not over the top and who needs and excuse? Great flow, it rhymed when it needed to and was just a fun enjoyable read. One you can read over and over again.

Posted 7 Years Ago


How did I miss this one!?!??! Sorry 'bout the oversight! You really need to nudge me so I don't miss the best stuff being posted on this website, ya know! (((HUGS)))

First, I love the song & can hear it in my mind without even using this link. Second, I love the playfulness of your message & I can feel all the sensual & sensory delights while frolicking in my mind thru your awesome imagery. Third, I feel very honored to have this "sea" connection with you, even if we are each gazing out at a different expanse . . . but the same sea of love *smile*

Since I'm late getting to this, it's magically become a Friday song of sweetness! YAY! We're on the same WAVElength, so to speak! Thanks for the romantic words!

Posted 7 Years Ago


redzone

7 Years Ago

OMG(gosh) she found it.. now what??!! er... I like to hide them at times, that way when they are fo.. read more
Waves of sensuality crash on the shoreline of this one, Curt. The playfulness of the romance made me want to read it several times...which I did. The song has always been a favorite of mine too. Did you know Robert Plant has a cover version of it? How apropos since he had a hit with "Addicted to Love." Sand castle fantasies do come true, you know...yup. Especially if they are dreamed of when the sea kisses the shoreline....ahhhhh....very nice, my friend. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


That's a lovely poem for your friend Red.
I am sure that she will love it.
There's something so special about the sea.
I wish I had the courage to scuba dive but I'm too chicken so I watch a lot of nature shows instead.
It's so beautiful under there.
Your poem is romantic and a perfect place to visit with someone special.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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