Where The Ocean Eats The Stars

Where The Ocean Eats The Stars

A Poem by redzone
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...just fantasy...

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Where The Ocean Eats The Stars

 

While sitting on this sandy beach,

taking in the night’s breeze,

counting grains of sand

in rhythm to the ocean waves,

I see you standing on the horizon

where sea and stars meet.

 

The ocean is calm tonight,

yesterday’s storm

has moved away

leaving a coconut tasting breeze

and fantasies of your kiss

that fills my heart with unease

and salty anticipation.

 

As the tides move in

and I watch its foamy waters recede,

I can’t help wonder

what it would be like

to hold your hand

out on that horizon

where the sea eats up the stars.

 

Aztec Warrior/redzone  4.5.17

© 2017 redzone


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redzone
...thanks for reading... Chopin, enough said..


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dearest Curt.... you have touched the Stars and
found the music of the Ocean as it wanders in the
Moon's glow. I have discovered the essence of
romance and the dance. Beautiful words and sweet as Coconut
breezes. truly, Pat

Posted 6 Months Ago


I love this one! The title is off the charts, the way it conjures up a vivid mental picture. So much imaginative imagery: "coconut-tasting breeze" . . . "foamy waters recede" . . . I love the romantic longing here & I would very much like to be the lady whose kisses you are dreaming about! *wink! wink!* (((HUGS)))

Posted 3 Years Ago


All life's cares vanish when reading romantic and lovely works like yours. You watch and create images, saving those snapshots for the ages. Combined with the classics, they add musicality that echoes and never overwhelms...:)............

Posted 4 Years Ago


what a fabulous line and title. very romantic. beautiful music too. really liked this one

Posted 4 Years Ago


redzone

4 Years Ago

absolutely thrilled that you did Ana... I love when your sneakers tip toe through my poems and even .. read more
Ana Papaya

4 Years Ago

yes, he does create wonderful music, one of my favourites. always happy to visit!
When yesterday's storms vanish and all you can taste is the romance of the sea air with that coconut tang, well, you are in love. "Where the sea eats up the stars"....how often I have watched the sun being eaten by the horizon and fantasized. Oh, Curt, this is my new favorite of yours. Incredible! Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


redzone

4 Years Ago

Lydi, this is an "incredible review, thank you so much, you are much too kind to me... but no compla.. read more
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How utterly romantic ...... what a beautiful moment to keep ....
i am keeping this one for myself :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


redzone

4 Years Ago

what an amazing comment SoloSolace, thank you and yes, keep it, please.. I am happy that you want it.. read more
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4 Years Ago

I did :)

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