A Poem by redzone

….a softer reflection, a Friday prequel





Like a butterfly,

my heart leads me far away.

From North to South

and back again,

gaining strength

from sipping the nectar

of your flower,

my colors are always yours.


Aztec Warrior/redzone 1.21.20

© 2020 redzone

Author's Note

....thanks for reading

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A beautifully written poem with brilliant imagery that takes us on a journey with so little words. A joy to read thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Week Ago

The sensuality in your words is beautiful imagined

Posted 3 Weeks Ago

feeling light as air on love....a thing of and this poem.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago

Liked the light tone and imagery of this brief offering. Too many relationship poems are of either the can't live without you, baby or you done me wrong, you dirty sob varieties.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 Month Ago

thanks John... I know what you mean, I guess I have written some of those poems... and I agree, how .. read more
John the Baptist

1 Month Ago

You're welcome. Frankly, I think these types of poems have always been around. If not the poems, the.. read more
I absolutely LOVE the sensual suggestion you're sending & it's so subtle, I didn't catch it until the second time thru -- esp. lines 3 & 4 -- almost forgot the old adage about "going around the world" but this poem brings back an avalanche around that idea without using very many words. (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 Month Ago

thanks Margie, my thoughts do turn sensual at times... I know, strange, huh.... so glad you enjoyed .. read more

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Added on January 23, 2020
Last Updated on January 23, 2020



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