The Feel of Poetry

The Feel of Poetry

A Poem by redzone
"

....the art of sensual words...

"

The Feel of Poetry

 

The moss hung low off the boughs
as steam rose from the stream.
They walked
hand in hand
along the bank;
their fingers dancing
to the tunes wrens sang;
their hips swaying
to the sun's warmth;
and their eyes found
the feel of poetry
blowing through the trees.


Aztec Warrior/redzone 6.4.20

© 2020 redzone


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redzone
....thanks for reading....


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Your romantic style is delicious. I'm not into romantic poetry much, but this is off-the-charts as far as conveying a sweet loving feeling thru vivid imagery for all the senses! Great details to carry us away on a breeze of longing (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


As long as we're able to step into the poem, see the images, feel the sun, see the water move, we can be there too. This does that. Nice music too.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Beautiful. And I know Chris and Jacob already said it, it's about the feel of a poem.
You do romance very well.

Posted 3 Months Ago


redzone

3 Months Ago

well Ana, I'm just a romantic guy... er... ;0) thank you Ana for your words... I'm happy you liked .. read more
Ana Papaya

3 Months Ago

Welcome. :)
When I read a poem, the very first thing I notice, is how that poem makes me feel. Yours was uplifting, made me feel warm inside, made me reflect on the delight of romance and how poetry can stimulate all the senses. Nice piece here.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


redzone

3 Months Ago

thank you Chris, you felt what I was trying to say...
Christine Anne Shaw

3 Months Ago

Well you must have said it well otherwise I wouldn't have felt it:)
redzone

3 Months Ago

good point... ;0)
you nailed it, Curt.
Poetry is exactly that, a feel.
I know folks want to analyze poems to death and figure out exactly what the poet was thinking
when he or she wrote the poem. But really? Is that why we write? To transfer information?
Or is it to evoke feelings? I think the latter...we want poems to be an experience---
for each individual to somehow find a way to relate to the poem and feel something...
j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


redzone

3 Months Ago

I love how you see this poem Jacob and you are right to say transferring info is not the main reason.. read more

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