A Question in 4 Parts

....many questions, one answer....

A Question in 4 Parts

 

Part 1

Inside of a second -

a thousand lives burst,

the world shifts on its axis;

 

and you say -

(moving closer

your eyes dance erotically,

your breasts taunt) -

 

and you say,

“Well, are you gonna kiss me,

or not?”

 

 

Part 2

Inside a second -

after what seemed minutes,

my knees stopped shakin’

the room stopped spinnin,

your strawberry scented lips

teased and enticed.

 

And you say,

“Well, you’ve wanted to kiss me

all this time, haven’t you?”

 

 

Part 3

Inside a second-

standing so close

temptation’s taste

moves within your smile

and the feel of your antonyms.

 

And you say,

“Come, eat this hunger

on my lips,

the sway of these hips;

are you always this shy?”

 

 

 

Part 4

Inside a second -

head still in a sigh,

mouth suddenly dry-

 

yet I hear you say:

“Geronimo”!

“Gotcha”!

 

And I reply:

“About time”.

 

 

Aztec Warrior/redzone

Note: this poem was originally written and posted on another poetry web site in 2008.

Author's Note

....thanks for reading...

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Hi there,
I really enjoyed the way your words played out so nicely...
It flowed so well..and kept my attention.
Really loved it...
Lisa, getting late here in Spain

[redzone]

thank you Lisa, appreciating your words and visit.... glad you liked it....

[Lisasview]

You are so welcome!

[Richard Knox]

What a great little vignette, so full of intrigue and anticipation and promise! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

[redzone]

Thanks Richard, it was part of a poetic exchange with a fellow poet.... appreciate your comment and visit....