at holiday

care of kids

At holiday my family and my husband family decided to go to valley Tendiani. There is a green area.It was a rainy day.We prepared to go.I have four children and their also four children.We took food with us for eating.We sat out in tow cars.My family sat in our car and their family sat their own car.His wife sat with us after and my elder son sat with her husband .We talk about at any things.We got off  any please for draw pictures.We enjoyed it very much.Their family is so pleasurable.At lunch time we took it and we sat a good pleas and ate.Now we wanted to come back. When we were coming we stopped to some thing her little kid opened the door that time came a car from behind and stroke the door and it fell down on the road.We all shouted and we saw that all was right we did thank of God that kid was safe. We were so pleased for kid.And we reached home from happiness.THANKS GOD

Reviews

[Avanthika]

we sat out in tow cars , i hope you were referring two, well there's quite a lot grammatical mistake, but keep writing , just seek the help from other writers and improve your language but i must admit unlike others u will never give up your writing , so keep doing. writing is a unique art and only the writers know how it is to write your life and present in front of others.

[GA]

You discouraged me

[Avanthika]

sorry dear if u felt so , but i was really encouraging you , if pointing out the mistakes is a discouragement to u , am afraid am helpless, unlike others i dnt want to give false promises , on the other hand , i was encouraging you to improve your language , sorry will not repaet hereafter , go ahead with your writing.

[GA]

I want to improve my English but how will be

[Avanthika]

thats what i was suggesting you keep writing your thoughts, speak in english , talk to yourself , watch a lot of english programs, think english, write english and speak english.

[GA]

But there is not any to speaking English with me

[B.J]

What a scary time. But well written

[Ashira Macy]

Yikes, what a fright that must have given you. Glad everything turned out alright though.

[GA]

We were so frighten.

[Marie]

That sounds like quite a pleasant picnic. What a blessing the little boy wasn't hurt.

[GA]

Certainly we were lucky.THANKS