Recess

Recess

A Poem by Renata

I sit in the corner
of the playground
watching all the big kids
play hopscotch

a brigade
of bouncing bunnies
bopping
into each other's squares
and avoiding
the marked one
that is mine;

it all smells
a little fishy
or maybe that is just
the tuna sandwich
set aside
stinking in its own
rejection

so, I write another
little word salad
to consume
for my own sustenance

while quietly hoping
that some other kid
will break from the game
and enter my space

to tease me with some words
and a pull on my pigtails
so I'll know 
I am secretly liked

before the last bell rings
and I return to the reality
of mundane classes
of mathematics.

© 2025 Renata


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to tease me with some words
and a pull on my pigtails
so I'll know
I am secretly liked.

I always have been a lover of pulling on a pigtail or two, I like your writing, maybe i couldve learned some math from a beautiful poet like you.the way it stands now I dont know one from two.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Renata

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, D. You’ve pulled on my pig tails today just by reading and leaving me with a thought, s.. read more



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to tease me with some words
and a pull on my pigtails
so I'll know
I am secretly liked.

I always have been a lover of pulling on a pigtail or two, I like your writing, maybe i couldve learned some math from a beautiful poet like you.the way it stands now I dont know one from two.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Renata

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you, D. You’ve pulled on my pig tails today just by reading and leaving me with a thought, s.. read more
I don’t secretly like your word salads, I just like them. They are great sustenance for the soul. You always write with such clarity, it’s very impressive!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Renata

1 Month Ago

Thank you for the pull on the pigtails, John. i appreciate it.
John F

1 Month Ago

Haha! You're most welcome. Thank you for the poetry!

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Added on April 15, 2025
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Renata
Renata

Bordeaux , France



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