Love's Landing

Let them soar

like eagles

transfixed

bug eyed

in their adoration

riding a thermal

of hot air

into the seductive

glowing nest

of Luna's bosom;

Let them dive

heart first

head last

into a sea of tranquility

talons retracted

fearless

to the fathoms

of love;

Let them crash

and then bash

hearts shattered

necks broken

into the

basaltic blackness

of moon's mirage;

where their

one giant leap

for love

becomes just the

flittering

flattering

fluttering

of 

fractured fools.

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

What I get from this is the combination of nature and emotion...a good visual imagery!
I like the line about basaltic blackness of moon's mirage....
And then the ending which is kind of humorous to me.......:)

BB73

[Renata]

Thank you, BB73. I appreciate you reading and sharing a comment.

[Kady R.]

WOOOOOWW Renata!! I love the way you write, you have such a creative way in using words. Its almost like you're using symbolism here with this poem. Is it about the wounds that can happen when in love? Well written Renata!!

[Renata]

Thank you, Kady. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment with enthusiasm.

[Kady R.]

Welcome Renata!! You're poems are like paintings that take time to decipher. Very well written!!