Your Silence

Memories of us,flashing through the eyes;
In the deep dark night all became calm,yet
Silence from you, made my heart in death trap,
Sharp as the sword, cutting down into pieces,
Incurably left unhealed; Still surviving- Only
Nightmare I felt is the loneliness that you gave:
Gesturing my feel is getting difficult to understand;

Yards of the mile, though you are apart;
Once I enjoyed the rhythm of your heart;
Undoubtedly, I am MISSING YOU now !!  

Reviews

[Nightfall]

very nice...beautifully written by PEARL...!!
I think you were missing someone, when you' wrote it...?
here two lines i did much love, have a look

Silence from you, made my heart in death trap,
Sharp as the sword, cutting down into pieces....

reallly very nice lines....your this writing is dominant as others'''
In a short day's you've made alots of writings...that's pretty nice talk :)
& i did appreciate it...!!

[pearl]

thank u :) but i didn't miss anyone :)....it's a pure imagination that how one will suffer to live if their loved one is no more ( dead ) .That's the interior meaning of it.'Your Silence' here means that the loved one is dead that they cant hear him/her voice anymore.'Yards of mile though u're apart' is that he/she is in heaven.It has a deep interior meaning...and all the first letter of the sentence will give u a beautiful painful word . :)

[Nightfall]

yeah, i saw that all...really very nice...if that was your imagination, than i'd sy you're a nice writer...indeed...no doubt...

[pearl]

thanks-a-lot for ur compliment , pal :)

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

This is a great piece, I really enjoyed it and could relate.

[pearl]

Thanks for ur review frnd :) I'm happy that u could relate the poem and find the interior meaning of it.