Traits of the Fey

Traits of the Fey

A Poem by Rhea752

Demonically sinister 
Angelically fair 
Such are the traits of the Fey 
Pale pale skin 
Luminescent wings 
Cold cold eyes 
Twisted smiles 
Such are the traits of the Fey 
Earning your trust 
Then quickly betraying it 
Supporting your needs 
Then stabbing you in the back 
Such are the traits of the Fey 
They are visible 
But not tangible 
These malicious creatures 
Are your dark side 
Whispering treacherous words 
Corrupting your judgement 
Flitting inside your own soul 
Such are the traits of the Fey

© 2012 Rhea752


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All of it true. In my eye's anyway. You could say I'm a Fae expert (well not really...I've just read a LOT of books about them) They are deceptive, trust stealing, beautiful and horrifying all at the same time. They're all pretty much like this, it's in their nature, but not all of them will stick to their behavours.
Wondeful poem! Love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

8 Years Ago

Thank you!!! :D



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All of it true. In my eye's anyway. You could say I'm a Fae expert (well not really...I've just read a LOT of books about them) They are deceptive, trust stealing, beautiful and horrifying all at the same time. They're all pretty much like this, it's in their nature, but not all of them will stick to their behavours.
Wondeful poem! Love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

8 Years Ago

Thank you!!! :D
So descriptive. I love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I liked it but I'll admit at first I was confused but that was until I read the comments and reread the first few lines.:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

8 Years Ago

thx :P
Angelic_Dreamer

8 Years Ago

Ur Welcome:)
What a wonderful piece! The battle of the demons that reside within.... Bringing us to acknowledge the darkness within us all. Nicely done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

8 Years Ago

YES!!!! i think you are the first one to comment regarding the fact that the fey were the demons ins.. read more
Priscilla Sayers

8 Years Ago

me too:)
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Pax
great work.
i really like these lines:
Demonically sinister
Angelically fair
Such are the traits of the Fey
Pale pale skin
Luminescent wings
Cold cold eyes

the rhyme is so good.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

8 Years Ago

thx :)
stabbing you in the back doesn't quite match the diction in the rest of the piece. other than that good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Creepy...
The only fey I done heard about is Sookie Stackhouse and she only got mind reading and microwave fingers. Wouldn't be surprised if there be fey that are really like this. Keep it up

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rhea752

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Wow, this is exceptional. I love the dark tone of it all, the amazing imagery and description of the Fey. Beautiful enchantment once again :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love it! You're getting really good at your poems. Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rhea752

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
I love this...you know my fairies are like that! Excellent...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Rhea752

8 Years Ago

thx :D

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