I Am Me

I Am Me

A Poem by Rhea752

 
I am who I am 
If you don't like who you see here
Keep it to yourself 
And come back in a couple of years 

I am who I am 
Though I'll not be like this forever 
Everybody changes, going through life
Like a drifting feather 

I am who I am
A star in a galaxy 
I shine in my own way 
As you must surely see 

I am who I am 
I don't like everything about me 
But parts will fall off and new branches will grow
Just like a sprouting tree 

I am who I am 
Beautiful 
Bright
And absolutely me

© 2013 Rhea752


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I like this poem. The premise reminds me of a poem I wrote a month ago called "What is a Man? (God not this crap again)" I was poking fun at all the "what is a man" poetry that had been popping up lately with a self descriptive piece like this one though style was radically different. Yep. I like this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

7 Years Ago

lol thank you :)


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very good write my friend , remain true to who you are for the good and the bad we're not perfect :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
You defined yourself and also others who think that they are independent and spirited with personality of her/his own.Every individual is different and thus needs to be treated with care.
Very thoughtful and illuminating write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
zainul

7 Years Ago

You are always welcome :)
This poem is true. People tend to judge others by looks, and how people act. But this is what makes us.. us. We are who we are. Good write! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Like this poem :) the message shines through, good job, well written :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

7 Years Ago

Thx :)
so true always believe in urself,it was good one :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

7 Years Ago

Thank You :)
A good view to have. Once you break the chains of caring what other people think, you will truly be free.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I like this poem. The premise reminds me of a poem I wrote a month ago called "What is a Man? (God not this crap again)" I was poking fun at all the "what is a man" poetry that had been popping up lately with a self descriptive piece like this one though style was radically different. Yep. I like this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

7 Years Ago

lol thank you :)
I like the metaphors though the metaphor in the second stanza sounded a little incomplete to me. Still it reminded me, for the briefest of moments, of something written by Dr. Suess.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

7 Years Ago

Technically it's a simile.... you can punch me now :P thank you for the review. And i noticed the in.. read more
Jason White

7 Years Ago

Pshaw! Me being wrong is nothing new or something to get worked up over. Simile it is, and you are.. read more
Rhea752

7 Years Ago

Ya thank you :P
I really like this poem! :) Keep it up! 100/100 woohoo lol :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

7 Years Ago

Thx lol :P
The Invisible Girl

7 Years Ago

You're welcome! :D

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Rhea752

Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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I am a 15 year old girl who loves to read, write, act, and draw. I just started writing seriously about 2 years ago. I've been published a few times in small online magazines. I am trying to find out .. more..

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