No Room For a New Debut

No Room For a New Debut

A Poem by Rhea752

All I want to do is get lost in the music 
Escape from the chaos of this life
All I want to do is ride the waves of melody
Float through the harmony without any strife

All I want to do is close my eyes 
And pretend I'm not here 
How I was I supposed to know 
The consequences, I am no seer 

All I want to do is distract myself 
From all the pain, instead I come back to
The shreds of a tattered abandoned life 
And there's no room for a new debut 

© 2013 Rhea752


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~~Beautiful poem~~ I simply adore this write. What a beautiful rhyme you hold writing this poem! All verses are nice, there`s, I find, much mystery behind the depth of your words which showing the truth of this wicked world via your beautiful words. Well penned!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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~~Beautiful poem~~ I simply adore this write. What a beautiful rhyme you hold writing this poem! All verses are nice, there`s, I find, much mystery behind the depth of your words which showing the truth of this wicked world via your beautiful words. Well penned!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well done. Reminds of how I felt when I gave up MMORPGs and what others have voiced when they've done the same.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Read it once and I thought it was brilliant. You cannot turn the clock back on life. You can certainly reinvent yourself overtime but there is definitely no going back. This poem read very well, smooth and rich in thought. I really thought you gave this a hard effort. Great message, great poem. Keep going.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much!! :)
I feel something, but not the emotions presented. But the message is all the same.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

10 Years Ago

Thanks :)
It sounds inspired by poetry derived from the lyrics of a song.. nonetheless, well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

10 Years Ago

Thanks :)
This poem describes very well the way that music affects many people. Music plays a very large role in my life especially as an escape from stress and other things, so I quite enjoyed reading a piece about this feeling and function. Good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

10 Years Ago

Thank you :D
Music is a beautiful thing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
hmmmmmmmmm this reminds me of a song rhea , did a song inspire this one ? anyhow we all go through this peril but sooner or later you'll realize these pains make us who we are i'm a stoiker somehow i don't feel these things anymore

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

10 Years Ago

Several songs. Thank you for the review :D

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Rhea752
Rhea752

Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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