The Girl

The Girl

A Poem by Rhea752

The girl is of water 
The girl is of tears 
The girl hates her life 
The girl has her fears 


The mother don't like her 
The mother don't care 
The mother is fire
The girl she can't bear 


The father is tired 
The father is drunk 
The father don't know 
The girl ain't a punk 


The sister just left her 
The sister is gone 
The sister don't call 
The girl wrote a song 


The girl runs away 
The girl is in pain 
The girl finds the ocean 
The girl sat and sang 


The ocean is water 
The ocean is tears 
The ocean accepts her 
The girl lost her fears

© 2012 Rhea752


Author's Note

Rhea752
I know I say don't when it should be doesn't don't leave any negative comments on that please it's poetry in a little girls eyes.

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I enjoyed this piece, simple with a deep meaning embedded in it. The ending was really nice, how she escaped despite the pain in life. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A very reflective and needed poem. I like repetition..it adds to seriousness of this poem. Nice work. Keep it up.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Rhea752
Rhea752

Middle Of My Daydreams, FL



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I am a 15 year old girl who loves to read, write, act, and draw. I just started writing seriously about 2 years ago. I've been published a few times in small online magazines. I am trying to find out .. more..

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