A Nobody

A Nobody

A Poem by Rhea752

What could my future behold 
An array of my choices are gold 
What if I mistakenly choose 
To be a nothing in nobody's shoes 

My future is probably bright 
But what if I came 'cross a blight 
Going from my clothes ever so fair 
To be wearing what nobodies wear 

I want my career to be a real feat 
But what if I end up on the streets 
And myself I could always accuse 
Of doing what no-one would choose 

To be nothing in nobody's shoes 
You would wear what nobodies would wear 
And do what nobody would choose 
I'm a nothing in nobody's shoes 

© 2012 Rhea752


Author's Note

Rhea752
just questioning my future.

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I didn't have enough time but i read your some writings because you always encourage me to write some more writings by reviewing.
I want to read your enough books but i thought to read your some ppoems first before i got the bed...
this piece's really very nice and this time i'm really speechless what to say to you now but, this below one's outstanding
My future is probably bright
But what if I came 'cross a blight

you made my night again by this wonderful piece and i just daily think about my future but past never leaves me alone and i do hard try to escape from my past but it can't....
this' write encourages me too to look into a future, run from my past and live where i'm in present.
that's a great and an awesome write that i've ever read. We all need and want everything ffrom our future but past always try to make us hide from our future, this write makes me good and inspires me to look into my future and run from my past.

Wonderful write by "Rhea" :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, you're very nice :)



Reviews

I didn't have enough time but i read your some writings because you always encourage me to write some more writings by reviewing.
I want to read your enough books but i thought to read your some ppoems first before i got the bed...
this piece's really very nice and this time i'm really speechless what to say to you now but, this below one's outstanding
My future is probably bright
But what if I came 'cross a blight

you made my night again by this wonderful piece and i just daily think about my future but past never leaves me alone and i do hard try to escape from my past but it can't....
this' write encourages me too to look into a future, run from my past and live where i'm in present.
that's a great and an awesome write that i've ever read. We all need and want everything ffrom our future but past always try to make us hide from our future, this write makes me good and inspires me to look into my future and run from my past.

Wonderful write by "Rhea" :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhea752

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, you're very nice :)
I totally feel where you come from. The entire thought never ending.

Posted 11 Years Ago


We all get this way. Though I'd say that if you think yourself a somebody and act yourself a somebody, you won't need to worry yourself a nobody. I'd also say you'd make a great somebody as a writer. This piece is a well-constructed and insightful example of your abilities. Thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Hmmm. Very interesting. Makes me think.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very thought provoking. I like the flow of this as well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This poem has rightly got a lot of praise, well written, wry, clever and original, your English teacher is right, he has spotted you as a young talent, great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rhea752

11 Years Ago

thank you. also lol my teacher is a she !!! :D
well, one pebble in a shoe may change the world
=]
good thinking

Posted 11 Years Ago


Everybody has days where they feel like this. Never give up on yourself. You were destined for greatness, and it's up to you to reach for it.

I loved the last stanza. Very thought-provoking.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awesome story that was told throughout this. Rhyming is good, way better than what i could ever do. This peom makes me think if the same will happen to me. Great work :3

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow, the feeling of self worthlessness is overshadowing, and the underlying
passion of the expression brings the words to life, excellent job on this.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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