Unexplained Feelings

Unexplained Feelings

A Poem by Aehr

I thought you were a friend,
Now it feels like you're more
And a tiny flush of feelings
Has sprung in my heart's deep core
Now, when I look at you
I keep on staring for a while
When you say hi, and look at me
I automatically flash a smile
I wanna look good now-a-days
Whenever you're around
When you're around, I don't know why
I feel so safe and sound
I'm glad you are my friend 
Or maybe we should be more
We might be meant to be together 
But I really am not sure...
I wish I could show this to you
So that you would get to know
What's happening to me right now
I really wish I could show! 

© 2012 Aehr


Author's Note

Aehr
..... The weirdest feeling ever!

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Awww..you have tried to express a great feeling which is very hard to define but can only be understood.very nicely written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hidden emotion leave us wishing for better things. I like the thoughts and the desire in the poem. A very nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow i can totally relate to this poem ....i feel this way a lot of time ....i love it ...well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Love is the very weirdest thing everyone will feel anyway... because it controls us

Posted 8 Years Ago


I feel like this right now too.... but i don't want to ruin my friendship.... oh well... this was very relate able keep writing!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aehr

8 Years Ago

i can relate!
Unexplained? Balderdash; I say you've explained teenage love quite finely.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aehr

8 Years Ago

lol, thanks Tai...
Aehr

8 Years Ago

I mean, thanks Ryan.. (silly me :P)
Tai Ryens

8 Years Ago

What's the difference? Hehe
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AK
This is amazing! What I liked most about it was that I could relate to it, and it felt very true, very much like what really happens. the rhyming really made this poem outstanding:)
Keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


AK

8 Years Ago

well, leave out the best friend part and place the story in history, then yes I can realate to it. T.. read more
Aehr

8 Years Ago

oh, so can i!
AK

8 Years Ago

Hehe:)
Wonderful write.
Enjoyed reading.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aehr

8 Years Ago

thank you zainul, glad you liked it!
zainul

8 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
It deserves,dear friend.
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Now, when I look at you
I keep on staring for a while
When you say hi, and look at me
I automatically flash a smile
I love that part it makes the poem flow. 100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aehr

8 Years Ago

thank you! :)
.

8 Years Ago

you're welcome
it's great... I actually thought maybe you'd fallen for your friend and not written this hypothetically...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aehr

8 Years Ago

uhh.. not really, it happened with one of my friends, so i tried to imagine myself in that situation.. read more
Aehr

8 Years Ago

okay, i can't lie.. one of my friends did undergo this situation, but I did too!!!! :P Sorry for lyi.. read more

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