What If?

What If?

A Poem by Aehr

What if the moon came down someday,
To light up for you and I?
Would you care then? Or would I just be-
Something in the corner of your eye?

What if the stars sang a song someday,
So that you and I can dance?
Would I matter for the stars that twinkle in your eyes-
Would I be worth a chance?

What if the sun burnt our doubts away,
Just so that we can kiss?
Would it just be a trick of fate's hand,
Or instead-true love's bliss?

© 2014 Aehr


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Looks like an imagination of a one sided lover to me. Full of longing and unique. Very good.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This little poem of yours has a wonderful emotion in it . I really like the imagination the poem gave me :D . good work

Posted 6 Years Ago


So so beautiful. you inspire a lot!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice little piece of poetry.
All the questions asked are interesting and suit the mood of the poem.
Well done.

Thank you for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


The ache in this piece! Its short n strong!
These are the questions i find myself asking nowadays. 'Hey, do you even care? Or am i just a means to an end!'

sometimes we're invincible to those we love, n its painful. I felt this!
Thanks for sharing, write on!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aehr

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your review king :D
What every young girl wonders. Good stuff. Keep writing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aehr

7 Years Ago

thank you! :) Xx.
A great and touching piece enjoyed reading it :)
-CDB

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the description and the questions in the poem. The questions of love keep us guessing and hoping. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


A nice bit of romance here, Rhea!

Posted 7 Years Ago


That was very beautiful work, and well the content was absolutely romantic and lovely, i really liked what you have crafted here, and you know.. life will always give us a chance for love , and that true love's bliss is always a fate.. well done :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

431 Views
11 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on August 17, 2014
Last Updated on August 17, 2014

Author

Aehr
Aehr

Aspiring for fearlessness



About
Trying to keep my words alive. Find me on Instagram: aehr_x more..

Writing
Broken Walls Broken Walls

A Poem by Aehr


Silver. Silver.

A Poem by Aehr


Swansong Swansong

A Poem by Aehr



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Broken Angel Broken Angel

A Poem by Aehr