Divorce Shot

Divorce Shot

A Story by rhythm&blues
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(six word short story contest)

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Life after divorce,
                       it is possible.

© 2013 rhythm&blues


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That is entirely up to you my friend. The pain I know is intense, the self doubt piles up, the tears flow uncontrollably and everything is upside down. Lost, is a word that also comes to mind, but still, the sun rises. It may be hard to see through clouded eyes, but it rises. My opinion would be yes, if that is what you want. Your 6 words have spoken loudly...very nicely penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

7 Years Ago

I am beginning to realize that, I didn't think it possible but it happens slowly but surely. Thank .. read more
Jack...

7 Years Ago

Anytime my friend



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I am a young writer and I absolutely love how you put so much emotion into 6 words
marvelous.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I hope the following quotes will shed light on your poem.

You have within you right now, everything you need to deal with whatever the world can throw at you. – Brian Tracy

Our life is what our thoughts make it.- Marcus Aurelius


Find a place inside where there's joy, and the joy will burn out the pain.- Joseph Campbell

Love and Light

Praveeta



Posted 6 Years Ago


six words and instantly you spark myriad stories for all.. the message i get is one of great strength, courage and resiliency... divorce attempts to destroy them all...even those that are amicable require recovery and new direction..
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


You're totally right, even if it's painful and you want to die.

Posted 7 Years Ago


You're totally right, even if it's painful and you want to die.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

7 Years Ago

It does seem like that some days, thank you for your visit Kejara.
Riding the Rainbow

7 Years Ago

you're welcome:=)
Great truth and wisdom in these six words! Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

7 Years Ago

Thank you Rita, glad you enjoyed it.
This is one of my favorite six word short stories that I've seen on WC so far. This one gets into the heart of the situation. It shows that broken picture that divorce creates, and then it shows that there is hope for new memories and new growth.

I feel like this would be a good reminder to keep for those tough days. The sort of story you write on the back of a picture or a business card, and put in your wallet when you need that spark of energy for the rest of your day. My parents were divorced when I was younger, and if I had seen this story back then, I probably would have written it in my wallet (with your permission of course).

Much light to you, and thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

7 Years Ago

Wow, I'm thrilled by this review, thank you so much. You made my day Clockwork.
I'm married now, I'd say life after marriage is MORE than possible. I'm jealous, you stand above a vast precipice of adventure and freedom.

Maybe that's just me though.

Great poem considering you were restrained down to only six words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

7 Years Ago

Don't be jealous, grass always seems greener, you know what they say. Thank you for your review Sam.. read more
That is entirely up to you my friend. The pain I know is intense, the self doubt piles up, the tears flow uncontrollably and everything is upside down. Lost, is a word that also comes to mind, but still, the sun rises. It may be hard to see through clouded eyes, but it rises. My opinion would be yes, if that is what you want. Your 6 words have spoken loudly...very nicely penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

7 Years Ago

I am beginning to realize that, I didn't think it possible but it happens slowly but surely. Thank .. read more
Jack...

7 Years Ago

Anytime my friend
As you wish ...Marvelous...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sami :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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I really don't know what to say on these 'about me' pages. I'm newly divorced, have recently found poetry and loving every minute of it. I'm a bit on the shy side until you get to know me. My best .. more..

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