New Dawn

Is there a time that dawns

blown away by the moon's yearnings

to light up even the darkest night

when the sadness dissipates with a new sun

Reviews

[Jack...]

Four lines and a million views for the imagination. This is so true, those long nights waiting and wondering when it will all end and then the sun rises, paints the sky and sends to earth a sense of hope, even if just a little. Very nicely penned dear poet.

[rhythm&blues]

You are very kind sir, thank you Jack.

[Arsh]

Such pieces always provide peace to heart when it finds some kinda deep theory of thoughts within words. You express your vivid imagination through such lines. Very peaceful!

[Yousuf Rafi]

Such a beautiful write up... short and insightful !!

[Kristin Lee]

oh I love this one. It's both a question and a prophecy in one. Because we know that the sun does come.

[icelandicblue]

What a beautiful sentiment. You've penned this with few words but it is heavy with meaning. It's a wonderful poem.

[wunder]

~the hope and rebirth of a 'new sun' rising~
~beautifully expressed!!!~

[Ency Bearis]

Short but so meaningful, great piece.

[lee von cleef]

the new sun, is the old son,But where is the warmth, we would all find the wall, to reflect warm in the light out of the wind.

[Leslie Philibert]

a haunting, yet ultimatly optimistic poem full of literary quality, has for me the effect of an extended haiku,a poem that will be enjoyed...

[rhythm&blues]

Wow, thank you for your kind words Leslie, glad you enjoyed it.

[Baby Ricochet]

There's always hope because the sun still comes up. Great little poem R&B

[rhythm&blues]

Thanks Baby Ricochet.

[Sheila Kline]

Yes, there is that time for each of us - though some may have to wait longer than others.
I read your words and have a multitude of images appear in my mind - the sun, moon, light, dark, day, night, sad face, happy face. Your words are few, yet so much is said!

[rhythm&blues]

Thank you Sheila, appreciate you reading.