New Dawn

New Dawn

A Poem by rhythm&blues

Is there a time that dawns
blown away by the moon's yearnings
to light up even the darkest night
when the sadness dissipates with a new sun

© 2013 rhythm&blues


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Four lines and a million views for the imagination. This is so true, those long nights waiting and wondering when it will all end and then the sun rises, paints the sky and sends to earth a sense of hope, even if just a little. Very nicely penned dear poet.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

7 Years Ago

You are very kind sir, thank you Jack.



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Such pieces always provide peace to heart when it finds some kinda deep theory of thoughts within words. You express your vivid imagination through such lines. Very peaceful!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Such a beautiful write up... short and insightful !!

Posted 6 Years Ago


oh I love this one. It's both a question and a prophecy in one. Because we know that the sun does come.

Posted 7 Years Ago


What a beautiful sentiment. You've penned this with few words but it is heavy with meaning. It's a wonderful poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


~the hope and rebirth of a 'new sun' rising~
~beautifully expressed!!!~


Posted 7 Years Ago


Short but so meaningful, great piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


the new sun, is the old son,But where is the warmth, we would all find the wall, to reflect warm in the light out of the wind.

Posted 7 Years Ago


a haunting, yet ultimatly optimistic poem full of literary quality, has for me the effect of an extended haiku,a poem that will be enjoyed...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

7 Years Ago

Wow, thank you for your kind words Leslie, glad you enjoyed it.
There's always hope because the sun still comes up. Great little poem R&B

Posted 7 Years Ago


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rhythm&blues

7 Years Ago

Thanks Baby Ricochet.
Yes, there is that time for each of us - though some may have to wait longer than others.
I read your words and have a multitude of images appear in my mind - the sun, moon, light, dark, day, night, sad face, happy face. Your words are few, yet so much is said!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

7 Years Ago

Thank you Sheila, appreciate you reading.

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