New Dawn

New Dawn

A Poem by rhythm&blues

Is there a time that dawns
blown away by the moon's yearnings
to light up even the darkest night
when the sadness dissipates with a new sun

© 2013 rhythm&blues


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Four lines and a million views for the imagination. This is so true, those long nights waiting and wondering when it will all end and then the sun rises, paints the sky and sends to earth a sense of hope, even if just a little. Very nicely penned dear poet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

You are very kind sir, thank you Jack.



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Four lines and a million views for the imagination. This is so true, those long nights waiting and wondering when it will all end and then the sun rises, paints the sky and sends to earth a sense of hope, even if just a little. Very nicely penned dear poet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

You are very kind sir, thank you Jack.
And with each sunrise comes a new day of possibilities... The darkness can only have it's time for so long.

This was very well worded and I lovely. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Glad you understood my poem Rogue, thanks. :)
The sun always rises! Always. Just wait it out, Rhythm&blues. You will see! Angi~

Posted 10 Years Ago


rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Yes it does, I've found that to be true, some days it's just not as bright as others, thank you Angi.. read more
Profound and delightful wel done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Thank you Thomas.
I feel the new dawn is gracing you and your wonderful writes...Thank you for sharing this poem that dissipates the darkness...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, means a lot coming from a wonderful poet such as yourself.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Thank you kindly...You are welcome...:)
When things seem at their darkest, we seek the sun, and wonder if it will ever really chase the darkness away... but even in the light, we can see the shadow...
A short piece that says so much... Keep writing, R&B!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, wan't sure about this one, it's been a while since I've been able to write. Glad.. read more

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